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The ones who hadn’t lost their sight in the flash called out to the blind through charred vocal cords in a macabre game of Marco Polo.

2022-04-04 12:20:01

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  1. Hiroshima/Nagasaki accounts are real shit terrifying

  2. The stuff of nightmares that could come true one day. Truly scary.

  3. I didn’t get it, could someone explain?
    Edit: Okay, but what is this “Marko polo game”?

  4. I’ve been to the Peace Museum in Hiroshima and the wax figures showing those in the blast is harrowing. Moreso when I got to hear the first hand account of a survivor who said those figures look healthy compared to what he saw

  5. I’ve frequented this sub for a number of years and this is the best 2 sentence horror I’ve seen. Real life horror is far more terrifying.

  6. It doesn’t have to be fiction to be horror. Well done.

  7. Wow this is amazing! Loved it (the prose, not really our impending doom)

  8. I read this as “Those of us still able to work slowly hobbled toward the town hall” and for a minute, thought we were in r/antiwork

  9. In middle school I was made to read a book about the hiroshima bombing, shit was terrifying for 12 year old me. I remember one part where the narrator grabbed someone’s hand to help them up or something, and the skin of their hand just slid off like a glove. The mental picture…

  10. That’s when I realized the people who flocked to where everyone knew ground zero weren’t the stupid ones after all.

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    Legitimate_Lab_1837 April 5, 2022 at 6:18 am

    As the bones of my legs began crumbling under me, my ‘sitter’ caught me and whispered the words that snapped me out of the bad trip…which completed the first and only time I tried peyote.

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    Water-Bottle-Thief April 5, 2022 at 6:18 am

    Thought this was about that scp “befor day breaks” i think its called

  13. Very good imagery!

    Note: it’s vocal cords, not vocal chords.

  14. They should have NEVER removed the wax sculptures from the Hiroshima Peace Park Memorial museum

    When I went to that museum at 18, I was shocked to my core to see realistic depictions of humans who are facing the nuclear fallout from the bombs…

    I really dislike that they removed them. The whole trip was an eye opening experience

    Fun fact: our tour bus driver to the park was a survivor of the bomb. When we got to this map of the city before and after the bomb, he walked up slowly, pointed a house, and solemnly said, “this was my house…”

    Fucking heart breaking. Every American needs to see the evil we did there

  15. this is too real

  16. The visuals I got while reading this…really disturbing. Incredible descriptive writing. Really great horror. 🙂 well done @OP!!

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    Brilliant_Month_365 April 5, 2022 at 6:18 am

    This was well, written.

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    spacebatangeldragon8 April 5, 2022 at 6:18 am

    Getting some *Threads* vibes here.

  19. The first sentence sounded like SCP-001

  20. Nuclear blast after effects?

  21. The fact that this is exactly what happened at Nagasaki and Hiroshima makes this ten times worse. (in a good way)

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    -first_of_her_name- April 5, 2022 at 6:18 am

    Horrifying simile. Well done.

  23. If you want more than 2 sentences, read ‘Hiroshima’

  24. Sounds like a quote from John Hersey’s *Hiroshima*

  25. it was all they could do to warn us to stay away from anyone we heard who replied with, polo…

  26. Saw this exact post here two days ago

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    SimmetryAtItsFinest April 5, 2022 at 6:18 am

    Duuuuude, that was goooood!!

  28. Very well written

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    Musicknowsnobounds April 5, 2022 at 6:18 am

    Holy cow. This one gave me shivers.

  30. Evocative.

  31. Holy crap I love this writing style! And the story is horrifying, poor peeps.

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    Environmental-Win836 April 5, 2022 at 6:18 am

    Beautiful writing, but what does it mean?

  33. TBH Marco Polo is not that bad. Terra Mystica on the other hand…

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